the end result looks good (aside from the sky which is a bit too dark for my taste) but I don't understand your color combination. You bought expensive NB filters and took the time to collect 3 NB channels. Why do you then mix them? Why attenuate your B channel (Oiii) with your Ha? Now is there's an area where there's Oiii but no Ha the Oiii won't show. That's what Ha as L does.